KWA First Promo from FTJ! Video, On KWAWrestlingAlliance YouTube Channel

[Goku]

Is that a yes?

I not that big though and u not watch matchest?

 

[seabs]

I really enjoyed the potential I saw in the promo, you've got the charisma which just screams star. Plus I've seen some of your old back yard matches. CM Punk Vs You Wrestlemania 30. It would be a dream match.

 

[Stopspot]

Uh this is the 1st time I meet this guy and that were telling I was good. The only guy who I know was friend Kyle. And there we telling me I did better promo then he did.

Dude, I know you'd like to think of yourself as an excellent promo cutter right now but don't get cocky. Listen to me, people around you will always think it sounds better because things tend to sound better live than recorded. I am not saying all this to be mean but to help you in the long run. I've studied multimedia and rhetoric (the art of speaking/convincing/public speaking) at a university level so I actually know what I am talking about. Talking for a camera usually makes pacing awkward compared to your live promo, you tend to act it up a bit more since a camera is a machine and not a man.

All I am trying to do is help you out and make your promocutting as good as possible. Work on some of those points I pointed out and you will see a longtime improvement. Try to find a promo style that suites just you, not everyone can cut a promo in the same style; not everyone can do a Punk and not everyone can do a Dean Ambrose (two of the best promo cutters in the business currently) or a The Rock. Study multiple different wrestlers promos, try out how they do it and adopt the things that you think works best for you or come to you naturally. And you will develop a good promo cutting style after some practice. You show promise, you are just not there yet.

 

[Goku]

I really enjoyed the potential I saw in the promo, you've got the charisma which just screams star. Plus I've seen some of your old back yard matches. CM Punk Vs You Wrestlemania 30. It would be a dream match.

DAM THANK YOU MAN MEAN ALOT! I like to here people like my matchest and promo.

 

[Crayo]

Love how he just skipped Stopspot's NEGATIVE WRONG REPLY pipebomb, real star potential here.

 

[Stopspot]

Love how he just skipped Stopspot's NEGATIVE WRONG REPLY pipebomb, real star potential here.

I think we posted just about the same time. And I am just trying to help him out, I gave some constructive critics and some tips I got when I did acting (stuntman and fight scenes) and Rhetorics. Should help him in the long run.

 

[Goku]

Dude, I know you'd like to think of yourself as an excellent promo cutter right now but don't get cocky. Listen to me, people around you will always think it sounds better because things tend to sound better live than recorded. I am not saying all this to be mean but to help you in the long run. I've studied multimedia and rhetoric (the art of speaking/convincing/public speaking) at a university level so I actually know what I am talking about. Talking for a camera usually makes pacing awkward compared to your live promo, you tend to act it up a bit more since a camera is a machine and not a man.

All I am trying to do is help you out and make your promocutting as good as possible. Working on some of those points I pointed out and you will see a longtime improvement. Try to find a promo style that suites just you, not everyone can cut a promo in the same style; not everyone can do a Punk and not everyone can do a Dean Ambrose (two of the best promo cutters in the business currently) or a The Rock. Study multiple different wrestlers promos, try out how they do it and adopt the things that you think works best for you or come to you naturally. And you will develop a good promo cutting style after some practice. You show promise, you are just not there yet.

Oh thank you. I do practice though b/c I want to be the best and if ever get enough money to live on own and paid for wrestling school I would do it. And try to make in the Iddy but right know I don't have that. Work at Ice Cream Restaurant right now does noot do that.

 

[Crayo]

I think we posted just about the same time. And I am just trying to help him out, I gave some constructive critics and some tips I got when I did acting (stuntman and fight scenes) and Rhetorics. Should help him in the long run.

Dude he's rivalling CM Punk for BITW.

Spoiler

ipebomb:

 

[Stopspot]

Oh thank you. I do practice though b/c I want to be the best and if ever get enough money to live on own and paid for wrestling school I would do it. And try to make in the Iddy but right know I don't have that. Work at Ice Cream Restaurant.

Want me to give some tips on promocutters you should look at? I'd be glad to help you out even if by small ways, would be fun to actually see you guys get something good going.

Also a quick pacing tip: Find some kind of rhythm to work after. Also look at your breathing, your breathing can help you form a rhythm to your speaking which helps give you more flow in it.

 

[Goku]

Want me to give some tips on promocutters you should look at? I'd be glad to help you out even if by small ways, would be fun to actually see you guys get something good going.

Also a quick pacing tip: Find some kind of rhythm to work after. Also look at your breathing, your breathing can help you form a rhythm to your speaking which helps give you more flow in it.

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here my friend Klye Promo aka Kyle "King" as he call himself.

 

[Stopspot]

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here my friend Klye Promo aka Kyle "King" as he call himself.

He had some good pacing to his promo, what he could do from my perspective is maybe talk a little louder since he seemed to go kind of low from time to time. Also maybe punctuate certain words to give them more flare. Like this. "I will be CHAMPION".

 

[Goku]

He had some good pacing to his promo, what he could do from my perspective is maybe talk a little louder since he seemed to go kind of low from time to time. Also maybe punctuate certain words to give them more flare. Like this. "I will be CHAMPION".

yet people told him he was to quiet for a heel guy. And said to more louder like me. And more into the promo like me.

 

[Stopspot]

Yes he is defo to quiet for a heel. But it depends on what kind of heel he is trying to play. What is his character? Brash and arrogant? Just cocky or sinister? Different characters need different styles.

 

[Goku]

Yes he is defo to quiet for a heel. But it depends on what kind of heel he is trying to play. What is his character? Brash and arrogant? Just cocky or sinister? Different characters need different styles.

he trying to be a spolded prick that why he has the King part of his name in it.

 

[Stopspot]

he trying to be a spolded prick that why he has the King part of his name in it.

Then he definitely needs to be more loud, maybe try to speak a little faster without fumbling over his words if possible. My tip for him is to look at some early The Miz. He would be a great guy for him to study the promo style of for that kind of character.

Whats your character? Maybe I can help you out also. I guess you are working a face since King challenged you and a bunch of other guys. But what kind of face?